Some Comments I've Received
Comment: Interesting dazzle of your poetic pen.
Poem: Consciousness Kite : L. Chew
Comment: I love this poem. very deep yet very tender
in its own beautiful verses.
Poem: Another Ordinary Day : j. Xane - Poem: God Imagines : E. Khan Poem: An Awakened Understanding : H. Rouge Poem: Everything Affects Something : P. Masterman Poem: Consciousness Kite : C. J.
Comment: Well, I got to say I've never read such a nice
and awesomely 'ordinary' piece before... the alliteration
and repetition is amazingly impressive... keep writing sir.
Comment: An imaginative and beautiful poem. Aren't we
the tiny sparks of the flame we call God? Well penned,
Comment: Your poetry is so lyrical, so mystical - it surely
must be written to be sung.: -)
Poem: Be Love : R. D'Souza
Comment: I've been thinking of some things along the
same lines lately, but you've managed to put them into
words. Really nice!
Comment: I love this. I think you are a metaphysician.
Poem: Where Poets Meet : P. Masterman
Comment: What a beautiful piece of writing. I love the
spot where poets meet.
Poem: Sometimes When I write a Poem : F. Davidson
Comment: Great and interesting write...you have a way with words....10++
Poem: I Measured the Sea with a Thimble : R. D'Souza
Comment: This poem makes me think about how we
live our lives in such small spaces coveting and hoarding
insignificant things, when we have been given the entire universe!
Poem: God Imagines : D. Delores
Comment: Thanks for the wonderful thoughts and poems,
Bullion. You are quite the perfect balance of preciousness
and humility and it shows in your work. Thanks again, enjoy
a blessed week.
Comment: isosceles? Had to look it up....equal sides, equal angles... I've learned something today.. 'Can my kite fly me? Is it something it can do? Has it in this short verse flown you? C.J. 10+!
(some names omitted by request of reader)
Poem: God Imagines : E. Khan Poem: An Awakened Understanding : H. Rouge Poem: Everything Affects Something : P. Masterman Poem: Consciousness Kite : C. J.
Poem: An Awakened Understanding : H. Rouge Poem: Everything Affects Something : P. Masterman Poem: Consciousness Kite : C. J.